Her nipples were light pink, adorable little things. "I like your cock, it's big, and hard." "Do you want it inside you, naughty little girl? You're a naughty little girl who isn't a tease today. " She kept her wide, frightened eyes locked with his. He reached his hand out and gently, lovingly, brushed her cheek. "That's a good little sweetheart." She smiled up at him, a small little smile. "I want to kiss your balls," she said, even though she didn't really want to, because she's a naughty little girl who isn't a tease today and she has to do what the man asks her to do. His big hairy balls were hanging right in front of her face. This was the step further than they had gone before (several times from the tone of the story) and should have had a greater emotional pinching to it. Thank you so much for that feedback, sweetie, I definitely agree that the 'breaking point' would have been better as you describe it.
It made the little girl feel grown up, to show her titties to him. He was on his knees between her wide-spread legs, his engorged penis sticking out above her. " She kept her eyes on his penis, touching it gently, reverentially. " Her wide eyes were still staring at his penis, her hands still lightly touching it. "But if I want to put it in you, you'll let me, right? "Now, tell me you want to touch my balls." "I want to touch your balls," the little girl said. He lifted his shaft and presented his balls to her. "If you want to put your semen in my mouth, I'll let you." "Will you swallow it? He'd not asked it before but had she always wanted to? It's fine her doing it without question but a flash into how she felt by this as happened at other times would have been good. When I get a chance I might have to go back and rework it a bit.
Sono certo che sapresti scrivere storie migliori, comunque complimenti per l'originalit dell'impostazione.
[Translation: I am sure that you would know to write better stories, however, congratulations for the originality of the setting.]How cool to get comments from Italy! This story is really intended to be very minimalist; hardly any description, no background, etc.
"Pull your shirt up now," he said as he stoked his cock in front of her, "so I can see your titties." The little girl pulled her teeshirt up. Grown up girls let men put their penises inside them, she knew that. My only real criticism is that I think the 'breaking point' of '"You're not just a tease today, right?
She did not have any titties, hers hadn't started growing yet. Tell me what you think of it." "I like it," she said in her soft, quiet, high-pitched voice. It made her feel grown up to tell him he could do it if he wanted to. Naughty little girls who aren't teases do what the man asks them to do."' should have had some sort of internal reaction from the girl, akin to feeling proud she had managed to swallow the cum at the end.
Il racconto originale senza dubbio, quello che non apprezzo che non descrivi dove si svolge, chi l'uomo (pap, zio, fratello, vicino ecc.) .
comunque sono certo che sapresti scriverne di molto meglio."Take your panties off, naughty little girl," he said softly to her as he continued to stroke his cock. He'd never asked her to take her panties off for him before. Naughty little girls who aren't teases do what the man asks them to do." The little girl pulled her panties down, because she's a naughty little girl who isn't a tease today. Eventually it did end, but he left his head in her mouth for a little while longer, letting the final twitches of his cock expel the last few drops. "There you go," the man said, rubbing his fingers gently through her hair. And as he climbed off the bed, she thought to herself, if he wants to put his penis inside me next time, I'll let him.Then she spread her legs open again, her panties falling down to her frilly white ankle socks. She was trying not to taste them, but she could smell them, they were right in front of her nose. The man started stoking his cock again, his balls still pressed against her mouth. "There you go, my sweet little whore." She smiled up at him. Grown up girls let men put their penises inside them. I liked the interplay between the two protagonists.I often find minimalist stories like this to be very arousing, so I like to write them this way, but it is hardly the only way I write. The hardest part for me was creating a format for my HTML pages that I like and seems to work well on hand-helds.So if you don't like the minimalist style, do check out others of my stories (link is on the left hand up at the top of the page).--Chris I know he will keep feeding the naughty little girl his cum, having her always swallow it each time. I'm not sure I actually achieved that (feedback on this point--particularly on how my pages look on hand-helds--is very much appreciated). " The little girl grinned and nodded, holding her skirt up over her panties. " She gave him a pouty look, then unzipped her skirt and let it fall to the ground. Seeing that he was staring at her panties like this, the little girl took one hand away from under her knee and pulled her panties down, just a little bit, not enough that he could see anything. "I'm a naughty little tease." "I think sometimes naughty girls shouldn't just tease.